since everyone told me to put the queen of cheesey poems up on my blog, here it is:
SPRING BREAK ’08
Greatly anticipated with expectations oh so high,
spring break ’08 has been mighty fly
the first day was pink with a little shade of blue
relaxing and fun… without asta too!
forgetting those at home was an honest mistake
and to face the path of doom is a risk i have yet to take
hear, stress, laughter, and joy may sum up these days.
theres been luxury every sunrise, sunset, sunshit; every fase
because one thing i have learned so far
is to never let jordan drive a car JK
but so far, the best thing may be
i am truly learning about the B.O.C.
how thankful i am for them
and how God is currently watching over me
my relationships are strengthening
yet tribalism is still lengthening
to watch everyone grow up without me,
may be one of the hardest things to see.
left to think surrounded by nature
i realize how i neglect my future
and if i want to grow
i must get off my ass and seek to know
there were a lot of ‘inside jokes’ in there so if you didnt like it, im on your side.
anyways. the cavs game yesturday (friday) was completely embarrassing. though i have go to give it to their second team comming in, the were down soo much! it was like 12 or more points difference and they brought it up to 5. so 95 to 100 and hughes wins again. thats what we get for trading him!! hahahaaaaa
4 thoughts on “POEM from spring break prayer meeting”
Elli, that was a totally cool poem. Really vulnerable, too. I’m so glad you took the plunge and shared it like this.
clean your room jk
I loved your poem. I love how you write so openly and honestly. I’m with you on the Jordan driving thing!
hey loved the poem then(made me tear up) and still does
ur right about jordan and the comment ur mom made is hilarious…